Twelve-year-old Ally is the only witness to a bank robbery in her small
town. Unable to block out the memory of the robbers, a notorious gang
known as the Gauze Men, Ally joins her little brother and a bunch of
neighborhood boys digging a hole in her backyard. Only the hole isn't
just a hole - it's a massive set of tunnels snaking beneath the
neighborhood and heading for an abandoned steel mill. Ally is old enough
to know the danger, but she reasons spending time with sixth-grade
heartthrob Paul is more fun than sitting at home with her worries. And
dangerous it is - none of the kids' parents realize the tunnels exist,
but the Gauze Men might.
I've just finished reading the book and it's filled with adventure and excitement... and mud! And every kid loves mud. I know when I was 10 or 11, I would have adored the idea of digging tunnels under the backyard. When I heard the extraordinary story of how and why this book was published (and where the proceeds are going), I bought the book from Amazon to show my support -- if you know me, you may realize how unusual this is, because normally I only support indies! And I welcomed the chance to have Natalie Bahm on my blog.
Take it away, Natalie!
Take it away, Natalie!
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Want to Write More?
Get a Critique Partner.
A year ago I was so frustrated with writing I almost quit.
My life was chaotic, thanks mostly to my four little
children. I hadn’t finished a book in
over two years. I felt guilty about not
making time to write.
I decided I needed a real critique partner—someone I could
trade pages with on a daily basis. I
wanted someone who would push me to finish a book. This person was Wen Baragrey.
Wen and I started sharing books about a year ago. Since then, we’ve both written two complete
books and started several more. I’ve
written more pages this year than just about every year before combined.
This is why:
1) For me, being accountable on a daily basis is
CRUCIAL. Before I started working with
Wen, I didn’t write regularly. I needed
to know someone was waiting for the story—someone I didn’t want to
disappoint—before I felt motivated to get my daily writing done.
2) Reading her writing made me want work
harder. Wen is an amazing writer, but
more than that, she’s brilliant at some of the things that I struggle with—like
description and humor. Reading her stuff
makes me push harder when writing my own. I’m a way stronger writer now than I
was a year ago.
3)She is ALWAYS positive about the first
draft. I believe that once a manuscript
is done you need a harsh critique or two… or ten. But during a first draft there’s no such a
thing as too much praise.
Wen has taught me that positive
reinforcement is important. As writers
we’re hard on ourselves. If I had a
dollar for every time I think I should quit writing because I suck and I’ll
never be good enough, I’d be a rich woman.
I’ve realized it’s essential to have a voice in our lives counteracting that
negative self-talk.
Wen is also the biggest reason that my first book, The Secret Underground, is out now. Wen’s grandson, Jayden, has been very ill
since birth and her daughter and son-in-law have struggled to pay the
bills. I felt like I needed to do
something to help them.
I called my agent, Sara Megibow, and asked if we could do a
book for Jayden. She thought it was a
great idea. Wen spent countless hours reading and rereading the book, offering
critiques and advice, and drawing the beautiful interior illustrations.
All profits from sales of The Secret Underground go directly to Jayden’s family. You can read
more about the project here.
The paperback version is available on Amazon. The eBook can be purchased just about
anywhere eBooks are sold. The audiobook
is available through iTunes,
Audible, and Amazon. The paperback will be available through more
booksellers soon.
Thank you so much for joining us today, Natalie. Readers, please consider helping Baby Jayden by buying the book!
As a mother of a three month old preemie (he turns 13 years old next month), I know how painful it is to have a very sick baby. I'm lucky. I live in Canada. His health care was paid by the government.
ReplyDeleteI love what Natalie has done.
Ah, Stina, I didn't know you had a preemie. So glad to hear he's turning 13 next month, and Happy Birthday to him!
DeleteYes, Natalie is an inspiration to us all.
I need lots of postivity in a first draft, so I love the idea of encouragement first, followed by critique.
ReplyDeleteNatalie, I've read other places about Jayden and that you published your book with proceeds going to Jayden. A selfless and beautiful thing.
You and me both, Barbara. I'm planning to make an effort to encourage my CPs with their first drafts.
DeleteMy critique partners are invaluable.
ReplyDeleteIt's great seeing Natalie here. I read her book recently and thought it was fantastic.
Hi Medeia! It's a great story, isn't it? And the worthy cause is icing on the cake.
DeleteSo agree on how important a critique partner is. And it's awesome what you're doing Natalie with your book.
ReplyDeleteAww, I'm so glad I checked twitter today (I nearly ran out of time) I didn't know Natalie had written this! It's pretty much made my day. Especially since she is about the best thing to ever happen to my writing too! And she's right, having someone you don't want to disappoint really gets you churning out the pages. Having someone as selfless and wonderful as Natalie is pretty much a gift, whether it comes to writing or anything else. I love her to bits :)
ReplyDeleteWen! Thank you so much for visiting the blog. I feel that I know you through Natalie now. She's very lucky to have you as a critique partner.
DeleteWe're all pulling for your adorable grandson.
Thanks so much for having me, Joanne! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for being here, Natalie! It was my pleasure. Hope you sell lots and lots of books.
DeleteI've heard a lot about this book and how Natalie is helping this family. I keep thinking about ordering it. I just need to go ahead and do it. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteI hope you do, Michelle! It's a great cause!
DeleteIf this is on BN I'm going to download a copy. :)
ReplyDelete~Akoss
Yay! And yes, it is available as a Nook book. Thanks, Akoss.
DeleteThanks for sharing some of the story of your writing journey with us, Natalie! I'm getting a Nook for Christmas and your book will be the first one I buy for it. The Secret Underground sounds like the kind of story I love and what an easy way to help someone in need!
ReplyDeleteCindy
Thank you so much, Cindy! *HUGS*
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